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Here I stand a lone
Sadness fading me,
All that once was;
A shadow I will be
Is now forgotten,
Lost,
Dead…
To my once whole heart
My soul is falling apart.
No words,
Just emotion
An ocean of
Tears full of speechless sorrow
Voices are but silent
In the whispered cries,
Of fallen mothers,
Lost,
Dead…
They no longer dwell,
In morning sun rise.
Placed into a sea
Of dieing dirt of the stars
Where we once inhabited
Of loving father’s instead…
We sing a song a faith and hope
But to be torn apart of those who had assurance
Within themselves to believe,
But now,
Lost,
Dead…
To the minds of the free,
Sadness creeps in…
Taking over thee.
LostBlueDreams~
Sadness fading me,
All that once was;
A shadow I will be
Is now forgotten,
Lost,
Dead…
To my once whole heart
My soul is falling apart.
No words,
Just emotion
An ocean of
Tears full of speechless sorrow
Voices are but silent
In the whispered cries,
Of fallen mothers,
Lost,
Dead…
They no longer dwell,
In morning sun rise.
Placed into a sea
Of dieing dirt of the stars
Where we once inhabited
Of loving father’s instead…
We sing a song a faith and hope
But to be torn apart of those who had assurance
Within themselves to believe,
But now,
Lost,
Dead…
To the minds of the free,
Sadness creeps in…
Taking over thee.
LostBlueDreams~
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i like it alot, but the rhyme scheme is slightly confusing, and you need to work a little bit more on improving the amount of syllables per line to make it run more smoothly, i find that if you have the correct amount of feet in a poem then you are set to complete fluency. GOOD JOB i still need to read a bit more of your poems, but over all this one is awesome YAY! peace