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Might I describe of what wants to be -
Me in flash of golden grotesque,
Parade of flowering gentle sweets of thrash –
Devine bliss of purity gone once they clash.

Touché.  They say.  One or twice, as I –
Fall yonder, beyond the dreaming world,
My mind.  Caught thrice! Through –
Withered fields.  Like darkened sky.

They ask for morals.  I say nay, the bleeding –
truth is I have nought but love for the freedom.
Strange, unusual, different, idiosyncratic,
They reply.  Random thoughts stray from

the mind.  What I see, is what I get.  Nothing –
to expect.  Faith in love, faith in Christ. Gone,
filth, evaporated.  Died along with my urge to
Fly away.  But I lived, you vision, happiness.

But once upon a time I was, you vision, in –
peace.  Then my heart froze.  Closed. Locked,
away.  Gone to stray.  Here I stand, alone, on the
bend, thinking of more. Intellect, strong, all I -

need.  Strength.  What I don’t need is, him,
her, it.  Likewise.  More or less, wondering,
Why then do you think, crazy? Perhaps,
perhaps not, even so, I believe I am more.
©2004-2009 ~LostBlueDreams
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Or in other words: "The life of me"

Yeah... read it, tell me what you think.

Thanks~

Dreams

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i love it:)

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If I had stealth enough to sneak, Around your house, I’d turn your bed sheets inside out
Thanks :D

Dreams~

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~I used to have an open mind but my brains kept falling out... blech.~

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I have to say that the rhymeing and rythem amuse me, and I can't figure out your reasoning behind some of the line breaks. all in all I have to say that I like it, the thoughts don't seem to flow, which fits the subject I think. good job :clap:

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"Finish each day and be done with it. You have done what you could; some blunders and absurdities have crept in; forget them as soon as you can. Tomorrow is a new day; you shall begin it too serenely ... to be encumbered with your old nonsense"
-RWE
Thankyou, that means a lot... Um year, thought I'd try something different ;)

:D

Dreams~

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~I used to have an open mind but my brains kept falling out... blech.~

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Mm.. well written free verse. The style seems kindda choppy between lines but that's what makes it special. I like this poem. Great job!

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well while change is not always good, different went wonderfully with this piece!

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"Finish each day and be done with it. You have done what you could; some blunders and absurdities have crept in; forget them as soon as you can. Tomorrow is a new day; you shall begin it too serenely ... to be encumbered with your old nonsense"
-RWE
Rhyme is absolutely great :clap:. This is very good and strong poem and I like it very much :).
whee! :D

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she dispels smoke from her lips & slowly floats away with it.
I love your imagery and the way you break your lines.

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